Oct 8, 2008 09:57
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njbeckett (asker) Oct 8, 2008:
The context is the open lines of an invitation to a wedding.
njbeckett (asker) Oct 8, 2008:
No sorry. Although I have read quite a bit of Kafka in German I don't know where this si from.
Helen Shiner Oct 8, 2008:
Do you know where the quote is taken from - book, letters?

Proposed translations

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Paths are made by walking.

Franz Kafka
Peer comment(s):

agree Helen Shiner : http://en.wikiquote.org/wiki/Franz_Kafka - under unsourced quotes. And this version does have a slightly different meaning or emphasis from others proposed.
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agree Ulrike Kraemer
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agree Joachim Krick
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agree Nicole Y. Adams, M.A.
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neutral Ken Cox : Good for the literal meaning, but IMO the figurative meaning is not as evident in the English as in the German.
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agree interpr8er : yes, or paths take shape through walking/treading them
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neutral Lancashireman : Sorry, I can't take this one seriously (a 'one-hit-wonder'): http://www.lyricsondemand.com/onehitwonders/thesebootsaremad...
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Paths are created by walking them

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Paths are created by following/walking them

my suggestion
Peer comment(s):

neutral sylvie malich (X) : hmmm, if you are following or walking a path, then it has already been created...
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1 hr

Paths are created by treading them

Just another option, as used here:

http://www.caminada.ch/index.php?cat=links

However, the "paths are made by walking" version does seem to be the one found most often in English.
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Paths arise where people go.

If this suits your context and you can take the liberty of departing from the 'usual' English version.
If the alleged quotation is listed as 'unsourced' on the Wikipedia site, it can probably only be attributed to Kafka, and the attribution of German quotations is notoriously unreliable.
Peer comment(s):

agree Susan Zimmer
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agree Rebecca Garber
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agree Stephen Reader : beautiful. Agree with your context proviso. It might be an exhortation to 'venture forth' etc. , which might require something more emphatic - though it could do to just imagine the "go" stressed a little in speech!
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We carve out our paths by walking them

In case you do decide to move away from the wikipedia version, another suggestion that I hope gives some sense of the metaphorical aspect more strongly. Normally one carves out a destiny - and I do think this is an exhortation to 'walk your own pathway', 'get on with it' and such like.
Peer comment(s):

agree Ken Cox : Now tht the asker has let the other penny drop, this would be more appropriate to the occasion
1 hr
Thanks, Ken - yes, it does change things a little
agree Lancashireman : Sounds like someone didn't remove their ice-skates...
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Images of rocky landscapes and hewn pathways ... thanks, Andrew!
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Paths are established, because they're taken.

Brought to you by Voice in the Wilderness Productions;

Kafka or not, the intent here is a paradox. a chicken and egg puzzle. A zen meditation.

The answer has to address the time and causality connection contained in the original. If those elements are lost, it's just words found in a dictionary.
Peer comment(s):

neutral Lancashireman : "Sorry, sir. This path is taken." // Ah, I see where you're coming from. Extraordinarily sensitive use of the comma, by the way. Regards. AJS
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Ach weel, gangin' it wis owr sweer onyroad. E'll jist tak anither.
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29 days

a path comes about only if actually taken

poetic license
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Paths open up, when treading them

Why not.
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187 days

Paths open up as you walk them.

That's how I would phrase it.
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