English to Chinese Other Poetry & Literature Narration

Even if the mainframe's rather clumsy text editor did not significantly speed up my work, it did make it easier: I could edit my text on a screen rather than on paper with whiteout, and the mainframe's laser printer delivered impeccable copy that was highly appreciated by my clients.
即使大型计算机的那种文字处理器有几分笨拙，无法显著改进工作速度，但却使得我的工作更加方便了：至少我可以在屏幕上工作，不必再使用修改液在纸上作业，而且大型计算机的激光打印机打印出来的文本教我的客户们大大欢喜。

最后这句话的中文译法会不会教人不敢恭维？请求各位出个好点子。